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  1. Kafka sweaty
    Shop closes in 50 minutes then I won't be able to get cigs...
  2. Back Lane Madders African Astronaut
    Originally posted by Kafka I'm trying to write a story but so far it's vague, people going missing on the train, they're on the security footage then they're not there, but it's not mainstream news, a terrorist trying to blow up the train just finds out. I have a vague idea of there being a black tentacled monster and another dimension involved but am not sure if I should just scrap this now, trains are boring.

    Start in the middle
  3. Kafka sweaty
    Originally posted by Back Lane Madders Start in the middle

    Hmmm. Maybe the ghost of the terrorist visits someone. Not sure if they're really a ghost.
  4. Back Lane Madders African Astronaut
    Originally posted by Kafka Hmmm. Maybe the ghost of the terrorist visits someone. Not sure if they're really a ghost.

    You have to introduce all characters in the first 20 pages, you don't need a 9 point draft, you can do it in 3 layers. Middle, begining and end. However you should write out your finale second before start and last part. Then tweek it


    Just lie down on the couch and work it out in your mind, record it on your phone or a mini voice recorder.
  5. 2fly4U2 Houston [my further incomprehensive anogramma]
    Waiting on our Chinese food delivery
  6. POLECAT POLECAT is a motherfucking ferret [my presentably immunised ammonification]
    just et me 2 quail with a bed of rice,, werent bad,, pretty tender but then again they wee only 6 weeks old.
    I put em ina glass pan with a half stick of butter salt pepper and garlic at 350 fer an hr covered with tin foil
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  7. POLECAT POLECAT is a motherfucking ferret [my presentably immunised ammonification]
    Originally posted by the man who put it in my hood do you ever feel guilty hurting so many innocent animals?

    just a smidge with the day olds and I reckon a smidge on the first one tonight cus it was friendly when I opened the cage to pick out dinner but not at all about the 2nd 3rd and 4th one
  8. Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    Originally posted by Back Lane Madders You have to introduce all characters in the first 20 pages, you don't need a 9 point draft, you can do it in 3 layers. Middle, begining and end. However you should write out your finale second before start and last part. Then tweek it


    Just lie down on the couch and work it out in your mind, record it on your phone or a mini voice recorder.

    Dont try to mansplain a creative process. Just lie down on the couch and resist the urge to tell people to do things like you have done unsuccessfully
  9. POLECAT POLECAT is a motherfucking ferret [my presentably immunised ammonification]
    scissors cut the legs wings and backbone out,, its a pretty easy cleaning job
  10. Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    I could go drink and BBQ with some peeps but I'm super fucking tired just wanna go atving and target practicing by myself and maybe go to the nearby pub. It's Father's day Tomorrow and I'm going to get fake love bombed and my mom convinced me to to see my dad so it's gonna be a doosey of a day
  11. Bradley Florida Man
    Originally posted by Kafka I'm trying to write a story but so far it's vague, people going missing on the train, they're on the security footage then they're not there, but it's not mainstream news, a terrorist trying to blow up the train just finds out. I have a vague idea of there being a black tentacled monster and another dimension involved but am not sure if I should just scrap this now, trains are boring.

    yeah it doesn't sound very good. Why not eliminate the retarded sea monster shit and just make it about a domestic terror attack by a neo IRA faction on the london railway and the story of people on the train. None of the disappearance shit, just fictional reality.

    A good inspiration to your story would be the Japanese railway attacks where they released anthrax (if i remember correctly) to bring glory to some faggot who they thought was God.
  12. Bradley Florida Man
    This one chicken where I stay got fucked up by a cat or a chicken and hops on one leg for the last three weeks, thinking about putting an inch of pipe on her good leg so she can KO other chickens and cats.
  13. the man who put it in my hood Black Hole [miraculously counterclaim my golf]
    Originally posted by Kafka trains are boring.

    Hiki really is out of your league

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  14. aldra JIDF Controlled Opposition
    trains are nature's deadliest predator
  15. Kafka sweaty
    Originally posted by Bradley yeah it doesn't sound very good. Why not eliminate the retarded sea monster shit and just make it about a domestic terror attack by a neo IRA faction on the london railway and the story of people on the train. None of the disappearance shit, just fictional reality.

    A good inspiration to your story would be the Japanese railway attacks where they released anthrax (if i remember correctly) to bring glory to some faggot who they thought was God.

    Nah. This all reminds me though that less people travel on trains which are destined to crash, so I may add that somewhere.
  16. CandyRein Black Hole
    On my first lil break of the night 💗
  17. Netflxchillr African Astronaut
    Grabbing some snacks, hunker down with the kit'ns 🐈🐈 & watch THE OLD MAN on Hulu, me thinks.
  18. CandyRein Black Hole


    Chuck chucking up the Deuces ...
    🎵💗

    And by chucking up the deuces I mean warm loving hugs and forehead kishes while saying goodnight 🌙
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  19. aldra JIDF Controlled Opposition
    oh I thought you meant doing a handstand and pooping
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  20. CandyRein Black Hole
    😆💗

    Shattap!
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