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2022-06-18 at 9:14 PM UTCShop closes in 50 minutes then I won't be able to get cigs...
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2022-06-18 at 9:18 PM UTC
Originally posted by Kafka I'm trying to write a story but so far it's vague, people going missing on the train, they're on the security footage then they're not there, but it's not mainstream news, a terrorist trying to blow up the train just finds out. I have a vague idea of there being a black tentacled monster and another dimension involved but am not sure if I should just scrap this now, trains are boring.
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2022-06-18 at 9:21 PM UTC
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2022-06-18 at 9:41 PM UTC
Originally posted by Kafka Hmmm. Maybe the ghost of the terrorist visits someone. Not sure if they're really a ghost.
You have to introduce all characters in the first 20 pages, you don't need a 9 point draft, you can do it in 3 layers. Middle, begining and end. However you should write out your finale second before start and last part. Then tweek it
Just lie down on the couch and work it out in your mind, record it on your phone or a mini voice recorder. -
2022-06-18 at 10:18 PM UTCWaiting on our Chinese food delivery
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2022-06-18 at 10:39 PM UTCjust et me 2 quail with a bed of rice,, werent bad,, pretty tender but then again they wee only 6 weeks old.
I put em ina glass pan with a half stick of butter salt pepper and garlic at 350 fer an hr covered with tin foilThe following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire! -
2022-06-18 at 10:43 PM UTC
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2022-06-18 at 10:44 PM UTC
Originally posted by Back Lane Madders You have to introduce all characters in the first 20 pages, you don't need a 9 point draft, you can do it in 3 layers. Middle, begining and end. However you should write out your finale second before start and last part. Then tweek it
Just lie down on the couch and work it out in your mind, record it on your phone or a mini voice recorder.
Dont try to mansplain a creative process. Just lie down on the couch and resist the urge to tell people to do things like you have done unsuccessfully -
2022-06-18 at 10:44 PM UTCscissors cut the legs wings and backbone out,, its a pretty easy cleaning job
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2022-06-18 at 10:47 PM UTCI could go drink and BBQ with some peeps but I'm super fucking tired just wanna go atving and target practicing by myself and maybe go to the nearby pub. It's Father's day Tomorrow and I'm going to get fake love bombed and my mom convinced me to to see my dad so it's gonna be a doosey of a day
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2022-06-18 at 11:40 PM UTC
Originally posted by Kafka I'm trying to write a story but so far it's vague, people going missing on the train, they're on the security footage then they're not there, but it's not mainstream news, a terrorist trying to blow up the train just finds out. I have a vague idea of there being a black tentacled monster and another dimension involved but am not sure if I should just scrap this now, trains are boring.
yeah it doesn't sound very good. Why not eliminate the retarded sea monster shit and just make it about a domestic terror attack by a neo IRA faction on the london railway and the story of people on the train. None of the disappearance shit, just fictional reality.
A good inspiration to your story would be the Japanese railway attacks where they released anthrax (if i remember correctly) to bring glory to some faggot who they thought was God. -
2022-06-18 at 11:41 PM UTCThis one chicken where I stay got fucked up by a cat or a chicken and hops on one leg for the last three weeks, thinking about putting an inch of pipe on her good leg so she can KO other chickens and cats.
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2022-06-18 at 11:44 PM UTCThe following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire!
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2022-06-18 at 11:53 PM UTCtrains are nature's deadliest predator
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2022-06-18 at 11:55 PM UTC
Originally posted by Bradley yeah it doesn't sound very good. Why not eliminate the retarded sea monster shit and just make it about a domestic terror attack by a neo IRA faction on the london railway and the story of people on the train. None of the disappearance shit, just fictional reality.
A good inspiration to your story would be the Japanese railway attacks where they released anthrax (if i remember correctly) to bring glory to some faggot who they thought was God.
Nah. This all reminds me though that less people travel on trains which are destined to crash, so I may add that somewhere. -
2022-06-19 at 12:09 AM UTCOn my first lil break of the night 💗
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2022-06-19 at 1:02 AM UTCGrabbing some snacks, hunker down with the kit'ns 🐈🐈 & watch THE OLD MAN on Hulu, me thinks.
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2022-06-19 at 3:58 AM UTC
Chuck chucking up the Deuces ...
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And by chucking up the deuces I mean warm loving hugs and forehead kishes while saying goodnight 🌙The following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire! -
2022-06-19 at 3:59 AM UTCoh I thought you meant doing a handstand and pooping
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2022-06-19 at 4:43 AM UTC😆💗
Shattap!
