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The Forever War

  1. #21
    Originally posted by Darth Beaver You are in dire need of new material.

    Oh the irony.
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  2. #22
    Originally posted by Dargo Oh the irony.

    Oh the Faggartry.....
  3. #23
    infinityshock Black Hole
    Originally posted by benny vader what qualifications do you have to give advice ???

    he's not you. that automatically makes someone more qualified than you
  4. #24
    infinityshock Black Hole
    Originally posted by Darth Beaver Oh the Faggartry…..

    of which you are not only the expert on, but a world renowned practitioner of
  5. #25
    infinityshock Black Hole
    Originally posted by benny vader i ate a lot of rice. now let me give you advice on rice farming.

    open your advice receptacle up bitch ……..

    I have gallons of fallopian tube spelunkers chomping at the bit to be freed.

    open up your tunnel of love for engorgement, bitch.
  6. #26
    Originally posted by infinityshock of which you are not only the expert on, but a world renowned practitioner of

    Faggart
  7. #27
    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
    Originally posted by Totse 2001 Write what is right to you Bill Krozby and let others critique when you feel like sharing it.

    nice Soliloquy you did

    I had to look up soliloquy its honestly been awhile since I was in school and learned about it in english or heard some use it. But thanks
  8. #28
    infinityshock Black Hole
    Originally posted by Dorf snatch Faggart

    that's what I just said
  9. #29
    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
    Though I will be honest "the forever war" is already a sci-fi book, but I wanted to use the title as homage/ show what kind of direction Id like to go.



    and evidently the silver surfer was into the forever war
    I'm not big on super heros but that was a pretty trippy cartoon, way better than the cartoons out today.

  10. #30
    Originally posted by infinityshock that's what I just said

    Faggart
  11. #31
    Originally posted by Bill Krozby Dare to take the read pill fam?
    \

    i feel like one day I will walk into a coffee shop and see this on a cover of your book "JESSIER ; A Bill KrozbyZLER LOVE STORY"

    its basicallu just hitchhiked into conception but replace §m£ÂgØL with Bill Krozby and hydromorphone with the DC cupcake work gils

    I thin,k you have a winner bud, go get 'er gont!
  12. #32
    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
    Originally posted by SCronaldo_J_Trump i feel like one day I will walk into a coffee shop and see this on a cover of your book "JESSIER ; A Bill KrozbyZLER LOVE STORY"

    its basicallu just hitchhiked into conception but replace §m£ÂgØL with Bill Krozby and hydromorphone with the DC cupcake work gils

    I thin,k you have a winner bud, go get 'er gont!

    thanks gont I think i could pull it off. cupcake and I are way better than §m£ÂgØL
  13. #33
    tru dat wirite it up fqaqmamal,almlm!!!!!!!
  14. #34
    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
    Originally posted by benny vader i ate a lot of rice. now let me give you advice on rice farming.

    open your advice receptacle up bitch ……..

    stephen king himself and phillip k dick both have mentioned on numerous occasions that the best way to become a better author is to expand your horizon and read different kind of books as well as different kind of styles with in the genre you are trying to write yourself.

    your point is null...
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  15. #35
    benny vader YELLOW GHOST
    Originally posted by Bill Krozby stephen king himself and phillip k dick both have mentioned on numerous occasions that the best way to become a better author is to expand your horizon and read different kind of books as well as different kind of styles with in the genre you are trying to write yourself.

    your point is null…

    my point exactly ...... when your stephen king and / or philip dick, you can give any advice you want even if they dont work and even when 0% of all those who got their advice go on to become another stephen king/philip dick.

    but if and when your spectral ....

    pfffttt.
  16. #36
    -SpectraL coward [the spuriously bluish-lilac bushman]
    Originally posted by benny vader but if and when your spectral …. pfffttt.
  17. #37
    AngryOnion Big Wig [the nightly self-effacing broadsheet]
    Originally posted by Bill Krozby My friend Jenniser and I have been friends for a few months now after I we both moved into a house with her and another girl.
    While going to college.
    I never had a lesbian experience before until I met her. One night, i was just laying in bed listening to music when jenniser
    walked in it tottally caught me by surprise considering I was just wearing my bra and panties.. she could tell I was startled and told me
    to calm down its not a big deal.. She asked if I wanted to drink and I said sure… We drank several shots of whiskey together and stayed up talking
    I ent up going with her to her room and slept with her in her bed.
    In the morning I got up because I had to get ready for school and when I walked out of her room in just a bra and thong our other
    roomie happened to already be up and saw me.. It was kind of awkward but whatever.. We ent up having sex and sleeping with eachother
    every night.

    Something about it just right and very natural, so we just went with it. We loved each other and definitely had a lot of fun.

    Our other roomie didn't like it.. she eventually moved out, so it was whatever… I really loved her a lot.

    One night we decided to go out, smoke and skinny dip at the lake in a secluded area.
    We parked by the water, smoked and undressed. We left our clothes in the car and walked bare out to the water. It felt great
    outside this night.

    We swam around enjoying ourselves for a good thirty minutes or so, and she told me she was going to walk back up to the car
    to get the pipe and bud. I will admit it was kind of creepy at that time of hour being naked in the lake alone,
    she didn't seem to mind just walking off like that alone, the car was parked at least a 100 yards away..

    Anyways I waited around and I started getting even more nervous because she was taking along time and not back yet. I called out
    for her but heard no reply, just the eery atmospheric noises of the night.. that coupled with my paranoia was starting
    to get the best of me.

    I really started freaking out and got out of the water and started running to the car.. It was gone.. what the hell is going
    on? I broke down into analytical tears, I just didn't understand what was happening, she would never do this to me.
    I started screaming for her and pacing around the area.

    I turned around and saw her body hanging from a tree, enough moonlight was on her that I could see her obviously lifeless
    body just swaying in softly in the breeze. I started screaming in sheer terror, she had no eyes.. what happened to
    her eyes? Just tears of blood dripping from her lonely eye sockets. It was horrible, but in a way she was still beautiful
    because she had been mine.

    I will always love, Jenniser.



    Post last edited by Bill Krozby at 2017-05-02T21:06:16.388277+00:00

    Jesus H fucking Christ on a pogo stick why man just why.
    I need EYE bleach.
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