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The Forever War
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2017-05-02 at 6:41 PM UTCEvery night when we go to sleep our consciousness and souls leave our body to the astral plane and then from there into an ancient malevolent dimension, a completely different world filled with chimera and nephlim we are there to fight for our world we wear special dimension suits black leather "gimp" esque suits that are semi robotic our bodies aren't actually in the suits but our souls are and the suits are meant to be physical so we can fight the physical enemy in this dimension. The dimension suits are all the same super thin sleek and sexy and tall like 12 feet tall.
The enemy has a human-esque body and cat heads and some are werewolf-esque humanoids. Reptilians and other creatures as well. The enemy wear thong leotard suits and use whips and axes as their weapons mainly
put our dimension suit hands up to the head of the suit to the temples and we fire out pink and blue lazer/lightning bolt things from our third eyes.
What happens in this dimension affects our world, it affects when babies are born and the harvest moon and other things of that nature.
It's the forever war.... -
2017-05-02 at 6:42 PM UTCSo what do you guys think? I'm trying to put some ideas together for a screen play
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2017-05-02 at 6:49 PM UTC
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2017-05-02 at 6:53 PM UTCTrippy read gont
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2017-05-02 at 6:56 PM UTCThe following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire!
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2017-05-02 at 8:25 PM UTC
Originally posted by Bill Krozby Every night when we go to sleep our consciousness and souls leave our body to the astral plane and then from there into an ancient malevolent dimension, a completely different world filled with chimera and nephlim we are there to fight for our world we wear special dimension suits black leather "gimp" esque suits that are semi robotic our bodies aren't actually in the suits but our souls are and the suits are meant to be physical so we can fight the physical enemy in this dimension. The dimension suits are all the same super thin sleek and sexy and tall like 12 feet tall.
The enemy has a human-esque body and cat heads and some are werewolf-esque humanoids. Reptilians and other creatures as well. The enemy wear thong leotard suits and use whips and axes as their weapons mainly
put our dimension suit hands up to the head of the suit to the temples and we fire out pink and blue lazer/lightning bolt things from our third eyes.
What happens in this dimension affects our world, it affects when babies are born and the harvest moon and other things of that nature.
It's the forever war….
considering your propensity for bullshit;
translation:
every night you dress in a gimp outfit with a tight leather dress then sneak into the petting zoo where you allow the various beasts access to the orifice betwixt your ass cheeks whereupon their third legs blast various fluids into your deepest recesses. seems legit.
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2017-05-02 at 8:48 PM UTC
Originally posted by infinityshock considering your propensity for bullshit;
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every night you dress in a gimp outfit with a tight leather dress then sneak into the petting zoo where you allow the various beasts access to the orifice betwixt your ass cheeks whereupon their third legs blast various fluids into your deepest recesses. seems legit.
you should stick to porn.
I can do porn and write, hell I've even written porn -
2017-05-02 at 8:51 PM UTCI've read a lot of sci-fi / horror books and I think If I practiced and put ideas together a litle more coherently I could be good at it.
I also forgot to mention that when the psionic lazers are being shot, they make farting sounds when they come out of the third eye. I know that kinda seems random, but if it was in a movie that would be super weird / trippy
as im sure you know heinlen wrote a lot of sexual things into his novels -
2017-05-02 at 8:56 PM UTCMy friend Jenniser and I have been friends for a few months now after I we both moved into a house with her and another girl.
While going to college.
I never had a lesbian experience before until I met her. One night, i was just laying in bed listening to music when jenniser
walked in it tottally caught me by surprise considering I was just wearing my bra and panties.. she could tell I was startled and told me
to calm down its not a big deal.. She asked if I wanted to drink and I said sure... We drank several shots of whiskey together and stayed up talking
I ent up going with her to her room and slept with her in her bed.
In the morning I got up because I had to get ready for school and when I walked out of her room in just a bra and thong our other
roomie happened to already be up and saw me.. It was kind of awkward but whatever.. We ent up having sex and sleeping with eachother
every night.
Something about it just right and very natural, so we just went with it. We loved each other and definitely had a lot of fun.
Our other roomie didn't like it.. she eventually moved out, so it was whatever... I really loved her a lot.
One night we decided to go out, smoke and skinny dip at the lake in a secluded area.
We parked by the water, smoked and undressed. We left our clothes in the car and walked bare out to the water. It felt great
outside this night.
We swam around enjoying ourselves for a good thirty minutes or so, and she told me she was going to walk back up to the car
to get the pipe and bud. I will admit it was kind of creepy at that time of hour being naked in the lake alone,
she didn't seem to mind just walking off like that alone, the car was parked at least a 100 yards away..
Anyways I waited around and I started getting even more nervous because she was taking along time and not back yet. I called out
for her but heard no reply, just the eery atmospheric noises of the night.. that coupled with my paranoia was starting
to get the best of me.
I really started freaking out and got out of the water and started running to the car.. It was gone.. what the hell is going
on? I broke down into analytical tears, I just didn't understand what was happening, she would never do this to me.
I started screaming for her and pacing around the area.
I turned around and saw her body hanging from a tree, enough moonlight was on her that I could see her obviously lifeless
body just swaying in softly in the breeze. I started screaming in sheer terror, she had no eyes.. what happened to
her eyes? Just tears of blood dripping from her lonely eye sockets. It was horrible, but in a way she was still beautiful
because she had been mine.
I will always love, Jenniser.
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2017-05-02 at 9:35 PM UTCRead The Talisman and Black House for inspiration. Those reads will be invaluable, if you really want to delve into this kind of stuff you are referring to here.The following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire!
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2017-05-02 at 9:43 PM UTCwhat qualifications do you have to give advice ???
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2017-05-02 at 9:45 PM UTC
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2017-05-02 at 9:51 PM UTC
Originally posted by -SpectraL Read The Talisman and Black House for inspiration. Those reads will be invaluable, if you really want to delve into this kind of stuff you are referring to here.
Rad, I'll check them out. The last book I read was clive barkers the books of blood, volume I dunno.. but it was the one that had that short story they made into a movie midnight meat train, the movie sucked imo.. but as far as the story for a 20 page story it was pretty good
i've always wanted to read the talisman but haven't gotten around to it. my favorite stephen king book was cycle of the werewolf. I read recently that new short story book he did :the baazar of bad dreams" but I didn't really like it that much -
2017-05-02 at 9:52 PM UTCi ate a lot of rice. now let me give you advice on rice farming.
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2017-05-02 at 10:09 PM UTCInspiration isn't advice.
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2017-05-02 at 10:41 PM UTCWrite what is right to you Bill Krozby and let others critique when you feel like sharing it.
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