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2022-01-21 at 7:06 PM UTC
Originally posted by Sophie Across the street the yellow phone on the wall started ringing. Tommy jumped, ran across the kitchen and picked up the receiver. "Hello?" He said, a little out of breath. Tommy's father was downstairs in the basement wood shop cutting a piece of clear pine on the table saw. The sound of the saw was screechingly loud. A big plume of agitated sawdust was forming in the air. Tommy's mother was outside on the front lawn tending to a small flower garden. She was visibly upset about her flowers condition. She was observing a black film on the stems and leaves, then trying to wipe this black substance away while running hose water on it. but it was too greasy and the water wasn't washing it away. The front door opened and Tommy appeared behind his mother. "Mom, there's a phone call for you." Tommy's mom stood up and turned the garden hose in her right hand shooting water. "Who is it?" She asked. "I don't know, it's a man. He said you would know what it's about." Tommy's mom stood frozen for a moment and Tommy saw lines of worry racing across her face. Something else scrambled into Tommy's awareness. he saw that the sky was noticeably darker than usual. And he saw a huge red glow moving on the horizon. Just then a man appeared running frantically in the street. The man yelling: "Fire is coming! Fire is coming!".
I don't get it?
Why was the yellow phone across the street and how did Tommy hear it from his kitchen? -
2022-01-24 at 4:14 AM UTC
Originally posted by mmQ I don't get it?
Why was the yellow phone across the street and how did Tommy hear it from his kitchen?
IDK man, sometimes words just pour out of my fingers. I often catch myself just staring at my nails, a bit pompously a bit bored, a bit in anticipation of what word might flow forth.
Anywhore. Across the street was needed to separate the location of your story from the location of my story by at least a street. IDK why the yellow phone was ringing. The story doesn't say. Ask Tommy, the man said you'd know what it's about. -
2022-01-24 at 6:07 AM UTC