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Story from when i worked at a gas station

  1. #21
    Originally posted by Obbe Why?

    literary intercourse.
  2. #22
    Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    Lol, Obbe read it and can't find anything positive to say

    I read the first few lines and saw it was hacky, boring and terrible and would not be worth the minimal effort required to read further.
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  3. #23
    Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    read a few more lines as I scrolled up to change the page and goddamn is it ever fake and gay. No one has ever paid you to write anything, it's impossible
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  4. #24
    yea, benny vaders american factory x was like 10 times better than this.

    10X better.
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  5. #25
    STER0S Space Nigga [the disappointingly unanticipated slab]
    he should've shot you in the face... twice.
  6. #26
    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
    It played out like some faggy Tennessee Williams play
  7. #27
    Originally posted by Sudo read a few more lines as I scrolled up to change the page and goddamn is it ever fake and gay. No one has ever paid you to write anything, it's impossible



    Nigga u jealous
  8. #28
    POLECAT POLECAT is a motherfucking ferret [my presentably immunised ammonification]
    it was just a debate between fictitious blabbermouths
  9. #29
    Originally posted by POLECAT it was just a debate between fictitious blabbermouths

    No its a real story that i wrote myself
  10. #30
    Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    Originally posted by MexicanMasterRace No its a real story that i wrote myself

    what's your IQ?
  11. #31
    Number13 African Astronaut [dispute my snotty-nosed seagull]
  12. #32
    Originally posted by MexicanMasterRace No its a real story that i wrote myself

    so tahts what youve been fantasizing about all these while, getting robbed by intellectually endowed nigger.
  13. #33
    Obbe Alan What? [annoy my right-angled speediness]
    Originally posted by MexicanMasterRace It is a show of my true love for you

    Ok, but I'm not going to read all that.

    Originally posted by Sudo Lol, Obbe read it and can't find anything positive to say

    I read the first few lines and saw it was hacky, boring and terrible and would not be worth the minimal effort required to read further.

    Sudo wants my dick.
  14. #34
    POLECAT POLECAT is a motherfucking ferret [my presentably immunised ammonification]
    dat nigga was adopted by white folk,, a real nigga woulda shot his ass when he axed the second question
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  15. #35
    Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country Dark Matter [my scoffingly uncritical tinning]
    Weird story, but well written.
  16. #36
    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
    Originally posted by Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country Weird story, but well written.

    He knows how to edit well but his stuff is always so contrived.
  17. #37
    Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    Originally posted by Obbe Sudo wants my dick.

    I want to split your dick open like an overcooked microwaved hot dog

    I might read this later because star trek says it's well written so I have to believe it gets better but from what I read it was really fake, contrived and hacky but it's good you at least try to write, lil golly
  18. #38
    Originally posted by Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country Weird story, but well written.

    whens the last time you see robbers hold guns to peoples chests ?

    i've never, not IRL, not in movies, not in comics, not in animes,

    not everywhere.
  19. #39
    Originally posted by Sudo I want to split your dick open like an overcooked microwaved hot dog

    I might read this later because star trek says it's well written so I have to believe it gets better but from what I read it was really fake, contrived and hacky but it's good you at least try to write, lil golly

    I make more from writing than you ever will from anything
  20. #40
    Obbe Alan What? [annoy my right-angled speediness]
    Originally posted by Sudo I want to split your dick open like an overcooked microwaved hot dog

    I might read this later because star trek says it's well written so I have to believe it gets better but from what I read it was really fake, contrived and hacky but it's good you at least try to write, lil golly

    This dick would split you open.
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