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This is the worst poem I ever read

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    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    "I am a Rapist?" by twhelan1999



    I wake up every day at five in the morning

    Picking the grapes from the vine from sunup to sundown.

    At night I lay on the hay in a barn

    Trying to fall asleep as the stench of the animals creeps through my nose.

    My life is tough



    "They are rapists... And some I assume are good people"

    ...

    I work 12 hours a day just to make ends meet.

    I get paid far below minimum wage, but I have no choice.

    Most of my money gets sent to my family in Mexico

    I live off two meals a day and six hours of sleep.

    Mr. Trump, who have I raped?

    ...

    "Well, somebody is doing the raping! Who is doing the raping?"

    ...

    Why don't you look at the millions of other people in the damn country?

    I cannot believe I am saying this, but I agree with Donald Trump.

    Rape is a huge problem and must be addressed,

    But blaming my entire Hispanic culture with the fault of rape,

    With no evidence to back it up is absurd.

    Tell me Donald. Who have I raped?

    ...

    " We have some bad hombres here and we're gonna get 'em out."

    ...

    Am I a bad man?

    You are the one who eats my grapes Mr. Trump.

    Would you like to pick the grapes for $20 a day?

    What bad have I done?

    I try to learn English, yet my accent gets laughed at every day

    I try to become an American

    But you build a wall, keeping me out.



    I came here trying to find a better life.

    I wanted to find a country that accepted me and treated me fairly.

    I expected to have Lady Liberty hug me as I entered

    I expected my neighbors to welcome me.
    I expected to be paid fairly



    Instead I have arrived to anti-Hispanic protests.

    They chant about building a wall to keep my people out.

    On TV they yell about how I take all the American's taxes

    They say that I get rich off American's hard work.

    Donald, I sleep on hay not dollar bills.



    Donald calls me a rapist,

    Yet millions voted for this man.

    You must think I am a rapist to.

    Donald wants to kick Mexicans like me out,

    Yet millions voted for this man.

    You must want to kick me out too.



    You are the one raping me.

    You pay me half of what I am worth,

    You are the criminals.

    You pay me unfairly

    And blame me for all of your failures.

    ...

    You Americans are criminals and rapists, and some I assume are good people.
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    Soyboy V: A Cat-Girl/Boy Under Every Bed African Astronaut [my no haunted nonbeing]
    I assume this poem was written by some Manhattan jedi with multi-millionaire parents.
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    Technologist motherfucker
    No I assume it was written by a Mexican migrant worker, or immigrant. Read it thoroughly Soi! It’s not a jedi thing I promise.

    I find it to be rather moving.
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    Grylls motherfucker [abrade this vocal tread-softly]
    Originally posted by Technologist No I assume it was written by a Mexican migrant worker, or immigrant. Read it thoroughly Soi! It’s not a jedi thing I promise.

    I find it to be rather moving.

    yeah i never really read shit like that but i enjoyed it
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    Soyboy V: A Cat-Girl/Boy Under Every Bed African Astronaut [my no haunted nonbeing]
    Originally posted by Technologist No I assume it was written by a Mexican migrant worker, or immigrant. Read it thoroughly Soi! It’s not a jedi thing I promise.

    I find it to be rather moving.

    Would you assume Grapes of Wrath was written by a bunch of itinerant Oakies too?
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    34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg Houston [my metonymically tentacled thales]
    I thought it was a book about angry grapes but it's just a bunch of people that lived in a house made of dirt
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    Soyboy V: A Cat-Girl/Boy Under Every Bed African Astronaut [my no haunted nonbeing]
    Originally posted by 34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg I thought it was a book about angry grapes but it's just a bunch of people that lived in a house made of dirt

    It's actually about a bunch of small farmers who are driven bankrupt in the Great Depression/Dust Bowl, so travel to California in a Jalopy Car to seek their fortune, and wind up picking fruit for next to nothing. They have nothing to eat but stolen grapes, so eat them and wind up shitting grape goo. I guess that's where the title comes from (it's also an Old Testament/Torah phrase).

    The book is boring as fuck and quite bizarre. It drips of hatred and bigotry. Anyone who claims they enjoy it is either lying or a sick fuck.

    I later had enough life experience to put the whole thing together and realised it was written by a slimy, subversive, wealthy, communist jedi who hated everyone involved simply because they were white - California Plantation owner and Oakie just alike.
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    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    Originally posted by Grylls yeah i never really read shit like that but i enjoyed it

    What was good about it?
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    34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg Houston [my metonymically tentacled thales]
    I didn't like the part when they forgot to let the dog in during the dust storm and all that was left was a dog shaped pile of dirt and the kid went to pet it and it blew away.
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    Technologist motherfucker
    Originally posted by MORALLY SUPERIOR BEING V: A Cat-Girl/Boy Under Every Bed Would you assume Grapes of Wrath was written by a bunch of itinerant Oakies too?


    Fair point👍🏻 The words strike me as words of experience. JMO.
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    Grylls motherfucker [abrade this vocal tread-softly]
    Originally posted by BummyMofo What was good about it?

    well, im high rn its a good story sounds true
  12. #12
    Technologist motherfucker
    Originally posted by BummyMofo What was good about it?


    It gives the perspective of our country from someone who is being shit on by it.
  13. #13
    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    Originally posted by Technologist It gives the perspective of our country from someone who is being shit on by it.

    They chose to come here

    In the poem they said "because I had no choice" but they did. Mexicans need to get their shit homeland's shit together and stop coming here feeling entitled
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  14. #14
    34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg Houston [my metonymically tentacled thales]
    Originally posted by BummyMofo They chose to come here

    In the poem they said "because I had no choice" but they did. Mexicans need to get their shit homeland's shit together and stop coming here feeling entitled

    As a proud Mexican I laugh at this. You don't want Mexicans coming here just living their lives being free but you want to tell us what we should do and how we should live in our own country.

    Imagine if a bunch of Mexicans got together and said Americans need to get all their shit together and do what we say but that would never happen because Mexicans are proud people and don't lack honor and pride like you clearly do
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    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    actually I take that back. Best poem ever, I haven't been able to stop thinking about it
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    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    Originally posted by 34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg As a proud Mexican I laugh at this. You don't want Mexicans coming here just living their lives being free but you want to tell us what we should do and how we should live in our own country.

    Imagine if a bunch of Mexicans got together and said Americans need to get all their shit together and do what we say but that would never happen because Mexicans are proud people and don't lack honor and pride like you clearly do

    What are you proud of? Your MS-13 gang culture? Your poverty?
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    Grylls motherfucker [abrade this vocal tread-softly]
    i bet you wrote it and were just looking for a thumbs up before you carried on
  18. #18
    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    Yes I did write it. I'm an active #resistance
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    34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg Houston [my metonymically tentacled thales]
    Originally posted by BummyMofo What are you proud of? Your MS-13 gang culture? Your poverty?

    There are no gangs or poor people in USA?

    Also MS-13 isn't even North American lol get your facts right before you go sprouting racist shit you Trumpet
  20. #20
    BummyMofo Tuskegee Airman
    Originally posted by 34nfi4w8g3wnfge4j93qrj309jg There are no gangs or poor people in USA?

    Also MS-13 isn't even North American lol get your facts right before you go sprouting racist shit you Trumpet

    Compared to Mexico which is a complete cesspool of poverty and murder? Gee if it was so great then why not stay?

    MS-13 absolutely is Mexican, look at an encyclopedia you crackhead nigga.
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