Giving up on this book

1. 2019-10-23 at 8:59 PM UTC

   #21
   

   mmQ Lisa Turtle

   Originally posted by iam_asiam68 sentence run ons are great for those who suffer from psychological disorders like autism. they will literally get stuck until the period is found hahahahahahahahaha

   
   Oh this too yes. I have a really really bad problem with run on sentences. I was gonna type a long sentence here to make another grammar joke but that would be redundant as I already did the semi colon joke up there earlier so basically what I'm saying is that yes I agree with you and its hard to determine when to stop a sentence especially when you're speaking in train of thought which reminds me of tacho not to be confused with nachos
2. 2019-10-23 at 9:02 PM UTC

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   Vitamin G African Astronaut
   Sometimes when I read a book I critique the author's grammar/comma or semicolon placement and I hate myself inside because here I am critiquing authors like Ray Fagberry and Issac Assicock who are prolific and well known authors, and still i find issue.
   
   If I have issues with accomplished published authors how will I ever be okay with my own writing?
3. 2019-10-23 at 9:45 PM UTC

   #23
   The Self Taught Man Black Hole

   Originally posted by mmQ Jokes aside. Nobody ever uses them on this site. I am the only one. I've never seen one in anybody's posts save for once or thrice. Out of billions.
   
   People will argue that "well yeah mq this is NIS nit a platform to explore shit like that and we are just shit posting!"
   
   But no. People dont know how to use it; in general. It's not easy.

   
   Hi.
4. 2019-10-23 at 9:48 PM UTC

   #24
   

   Vitamin G African Astronaut
   Hi;
5. 2019-10-23 at 9:48 PM UTC

   #25
   

   mmQ Lisa Turtle
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6. 2019-10-23 at 9:50 PM UTC

   #26
   

   Vitamin G African Astronaut
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7. 2019-10-23 at 9:51 PM UTC

   #27
   The Self Taught Man Black Hole

   Originally posted by Vitamin G ;

   
   A semi colon, because you haven't had a complete colon in years. Vitamin GAY.
   The following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire!

   • mmQ
8. 2019-10-23 at 9:52 PM UTC

   #28
   

   Vitamin G African Astronaut

   Originally posted by Misguided Russian A semi colon, because you haven't had a complete colon in years. Vitamin GAY.

   
   Lame joke can you please try again?
9. 2019-10-23 at 9:54 PM UTC

   #29
   

   mmQ Lisa Turtle
   That was actually a good joke.
10. 2019-10-23 at 10:03 PM UTC

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    Vitamin G African Astronaut
    Yeah but you need like a 20ft dick to fuck up your colon
    
    Well...
    
    Lol
11. 2019-10-23 at 10:21 PM UTC

    #31
    

    Sudo Black Hole [my hereto riemannian peach]
    §m£ÂgØL that was pure Douglas Coupland and better than I expected.
    
    Your avatar keeps fucking me up and making me think its totse4k
12. 2019-10-23 at 11:16 PM UTC

    #32
    

    Vitamin G African Astronaut

    Originally posted by Sudo §m£ÂgØL that was pure Douglas Coupland and better than I expected.
    
    Your avatar keeps fucking me up and making me think its totse4k

    
    I am totse4k
13. 2019-10-23 at 11:51 PM UTC

    #33
    

    Vitamin G African Astronaut
    Now I have to keep writing real shit and I don't wanna
14. 2019-10-27 at 4:57 AM UTC

    #34
    

    Vitamin G African Astronaut
    Update I am finishing it now.
15. 2019-10-27 at 9:42 AM UTC

    #35
    

    Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country Dark Matter [my scoffingly uncritical tinning]
    Speculative fiction authors deserve to be treated like a piñata
16. 2019-10-27 at 2:50 PM UTC

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    Vitamin G African Astronaut

    Originally posted by Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country Speculative fiction authors deserve to be treated like a piñata

    
    Filled with candy and loved by the townspeople until death?