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  1. #41
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    Chapter 4
    Chapter 4.

    She picked up her tattered clothing. the blouse was to long gone to be decent. She was naked lights still on. As soon as he appeared he vanished. He ravaged her body. He degraded her. Humilited her. She started to cry. Tears flooded her eyes.
    Then the door slammed shut by itself she heard a click. Frantically she ran to it trying to open the door. The handle locked in place it wouldn't budge. She was stuck.

    Her breathing hastened as panick set in. How long she was going to be trapped there? She banged on the door. "Let me out!" She screamed, she hit the door with her fists. She hit the door hard enough to bruise her hands. Andreline coursed through her veins she felt no pain. It was now 3 am in the morning she beat at the door for 2 hours straight all energy exhausted she crumpled into a mass on the floor clutching at her disheveled hair.

    "Why me?" She sobbed " Why me?!" She only cried.
    Her head was swimming 1 year and 12 days she thought she would be over sorrow and grief. She thought she could live a happy life and forget his shadow. All that she wanted was a happy life. Like her sister. She was glowing and radiant from love where her own skin was pale eyes puffy and ringed like a racoon. She thought of how happy her sister became how love made her blossom. She loved and was loved in return. She ached for that.

    She used to pride herself on resilience she was after modeled in the post modernest ideal of a working women. The one who emmulated success in a powersuit. Albeit dated she followed s working corperate path until she met him.
    He was rough and callous with a not bullshit attitude. Her heart thudded in fear and excitement every time he took her. She remembered all the good times then it fell to shit.

    His behavior grew increasingly erratic frantic over time. The cool calm demeanor fell into furious rage. He wouldn't speak with her for weeks even then one night with a bang he left this world.
    She thought back on the day before.

    She remembered it clearly she felt her biological clock tick. She was merely a young girl in love. She didn't even had a lover before him. She was cleaning his kitchen as he sat grudgingly on the couch.
    "Food.." he demanded as he downed his beer, his eyes glaring at her. She knew he meant the take out they bought last night. She went to the fridge arranged the left overs on a plate then nuked it in the microwave. She then presented it before him on her knees. She then sat next to him as he ate. Her body trembled she wanted him. Badly. "What do you want?" He asked annoyed between bites "I'm hungry..." she replied bashfully.
    "Then eat you stupid whore." He replied.
    "Not for food.." she got on her knees before him, she then felt him through his pants. "This." She murmured ever so lovingly. He was silent. She giggled as she unzipped him freeing him. Its been 2 agonizing weeks she was ravenous. Before long she slobbering all over his cock. Her pussy only grew wetter the more she sucked it was leaking a spot through her neon leggings. He was motionless enjoying her mouth. He then pulled her mouth away she whined.
    "Strip." He commanded. She removed her oversized tshirt and leggings. She was completely naked. He then dragged her to the couch. He slowly teased her by rubbing the head of his cock against her pussy she moaned tears welled as her body ached for him. He slipped it in so slighty she gasped her body hungry. Inch by inch he eased in. Her pussy was tight from non use. He finally hit her cervix. He started off slow grinding his way into her. Every movement felt pleasurable. She was in deep. She clung to him . His breath against her neck him in her. He went a bit harder. Making her moan more she was almost drooling. He was in her no condom..bare. her heart thudded. Then harder he pounded her with insane force imprinting himself in her. She cried out in pleasure. Her body clutching him with fury. She couldn't speak but her gutteral moan screamed her want of him. She clung to him harder his breathing in her ear.

    Then he pinned her by the neck and pulled out cumming on her face. She was bewildered and confused. He laughed darkly. "I read your diary." He laughed as he pulled out a pink note book . He turned a page as she sat bewildered. How? Why?

    "Dear Diary,..." he started he laughed "I love my master so much. I want him to marry me and have his babies."
    She blinked back hot wet tears the cum felt like an egg on her face. He continued on "Everyday I think about a nice house; and a pickett fence. A dog and a cat and maybe 3 kids? Four? I get so wet thinking about master making me pregnant. Its like hes claiming a 100 percent as his. I love him. I love him soo much.." he paused to laugh darkly " I wish my dream will come true I'll be so happy!"
    He was hysterical from laughing she was frozen with anger. Not wanting to say not nice things she remained silent. She fought back tears. "Like I would ever marry you...you are just an object nothing more nothing less." He laughed. He threw the book in her lap. She ran off to the bathroom crying after 5 mins she gathered her composure. She washed her face got dressed the silently wordlessly she left. That was the last time she saw him alive. Next time he'll be in a coffin.

    She woke up somehow she was in his bed it was morning and daylight was broken. A fresh set of clothes was on the side. She got dressed it was tad bit ill fitting but it worked. Her head swam. She relived everything in one second. The door was open. She walked out. In daylight she saw the house as it was before. The gore next to the couch was anbymssal in the light of day. It stunk bad. She went back to the room and searched some more. She found his gold chain. She grabbed it and pocketed gathered her things and quietly left the house of horrors. Pure daylight hit her as she walked her head ached. She walked faster and faster.

    She needed to be rid of this phantom. She knew of little occult cafe round the corner that may help with her problem. So intent was she on her mission she lost track of her surroundings. She ran into someone and fell on her ass.
  2. #42
    Nil African Astronaut [the overexcited four-footed chanar]
    we should start a pool for thot to write a NIS erotica novel, listed for sale somewhere with profits going to towards server fees.
  3. #43
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    Originally posted by Nil we should start a pool for thot to write a NIS erotica novel, listed for sale somewhere with profits going to towards server fees.

    Space niggas adventure
    All male bbc homeoerotic adventure in the galaxy.
    The following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire!
  4. #44
    CASPER Soldier of Fourchin
    Originally posted by Thotgirl I don't like ghosts if i were to pick a supernatural id fuck and obssess about id go with a vampire then go on a blood cult killing to honor my vampire lord.

    Harsh, yo.
  5. #45
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    Originally posted by CASPER Harsh, yo.

    Makes more sense then going to a grocery store and shooting up people for tranny ghost reincarnation!
  6. #46
    Dregs African Astronaut [that freakishly double-edged allmouth]
    Impressive writing. 8.5/10 from what I've read so far. You should do one on a serial killer or redo a slasher movie but in poetry of course.
  7. #47
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    Done with Chapter 5

    Chapter 5
    "Fuck ." She muttered as she looked up. Her face flushed red it was the most handsome boss in the office. All the ladies swooned over him. He was a tad bit up in years but none the less handsome. He had black hair piercing blue eyes a face that most classical statues had. He wore tailored black business suits all the time but behind it was a pysique that the hand of god himself chiseled.

    He was imposing but sweet. "Oh Anne.." he helped her up "I'm terribly sorry.."
    "No..no.." She blustered flushing crimson as he helped her up "I was my fault." She looked down bashfully like a school girl. " Heh. Nice morning is it? " he asked.
    "W-why yes...it is. " she replied awkwardly. Luckily it was her day off. "I gotta go." She spoke wanting to exit immediately. "Coffee later..? You have my number." He spoke as she waved goodbye " Yes well see..garfield has tummy issues I gotta get his meds." She replied as she awkwardly scrambled away.
    He looked as she turned the corner his piercing blue eyes conveyed want. 10 more paces and tiredly she found herself at the front of the cafe. The house stuck out like a sore thumb in the city. It was one of the only buildings to survive neighborhood remodeling. A mint green and lavander victorian. Outside a woman with long black flowing hair stood at the front. She was beautiful with piercing features and purple eyes. She seemed to be expecting her.
    Gracefully like a cat she walked towards anne, and in a motherly gesture ushered her in. Inside the house was cluttered. Oddities and trinkets of a by gone era strewed hear and there. The house though at little bit worn for wear matched the mood. The lady wordlessy led her to a parlor and with no introduction she turned away and poured herself a glass of brandy.

    " I know why your here.." she spoke matter of factly "Your being haunted possessed by a spirit."
    She sat down her eyes intently stared at the bewildered girl. She brought the glass to her lips. " This spirit is dear to you..nothing I can do to remove him from you. The bond is too strong. He doesn't even believe he's even dead." She said sorrowfully " However that doesn't mean you can't be helped. He can not leave this earth in his present state. However I can make it so you can no longer see him or feel him. You suffered to long in agony."
    "You can..? Really oh dear please.." she fell to her knees tears of joy in her eyes. Freedom. Freedom at last.

    The mysterious lady finished her cup then she went to a back room Anne was giddy in delight. She retrieved a necklace. It was a simple silver pendant . It had a needle lined with red inset into it.
    "The power he draws from is Lilith the first wife of adam." She spoke " Lilith is the queen of all incubuses and succubuses that is how he is able to rape you. He draws from her power. When you wear this his power that he borrowed from her will be repelled. You will no longer see him feel him or notice him. Should lilith herself appear.." she continued she pulled out the needle "Stick this needle into her. She will disappear immediately and wear this pedant always as it has been handed down from generations to repel lilith."
    She affixed the necklace on her neck.
    "I normally charge but child you have suffered long..." she hugged the girl " Now go."

    She was seen out the necklace gleamed around her neck in the sun atlast she was free or so she thought.

    Later that day she got home immediately stripped the ran the bath water. The house didn't have that prescence. Garfield was still hissing at the chair but she felt nothing but peace. Peacefully she slipped in the bath calmly she relaxed. Then went to bed.

    The next two weeks was uneventful she blinded to him. She finally settled into a routine and work became more productive. Finally life was coming together.

    Alas though little did she knew it would come crashing down. Nothing lasts forever.
  8. #48
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    Please note rough draft will be touched up later...
  9. #49
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    This is starting to sound like rose marys baby..
  10. #50
    Dregs African Astronaut [that freakishly double-edged allmouth]
    i hated that movie but i'm sure your shit will end up better than that piece of shit
  11. #51
    Thotgirl African Astronaut
    Originally posted by Dregs i hated that movie but i'm sure your shit will end up better than that piece of shit

    Almost done with chapter 6
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