Trying to make lofi indie pop

1. 2015-10-23 at 9:20 PM UTC

   #1
   

   kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
   In the realm of ween, bones, guided by voices, mac demarco.
   
   Heres a lil sample constructive critiques are welcome
   
   https://soundcloud.com/churzz21/loving-forever
2. 2015-10-23 at 10:17 PM UTC

   #2
   The Self Taught Man Black Hole
   Fucking terrible.
3. 2015-10-23 at 10:21 PM UTC

   #3
   

   Sophie Pedophile Tech Support
   Eeww don't sing, i thought you were producing beats.
4. 2015-10-23 at 10:38 PM UTC

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   kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
   ^I sing and play bass/guitar
   Is this better?
   
   https://soundcloud.com/churzz21/just-with-out-you
5. 2015-10-23 at 11:41 PM UTC

   #5
   The Self Taught Man Black Hole
   even more terrible
6. 2015-10-24 at 1:05 PM UTC

   #6
   The Self Taught Man Black Hole
   Bill Krozby, your mom was lying when she told you that you could sing.
7. 2015-10-24 at 3:41 PM UTC

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   mashlehash victim of incest [my perspicuously dependant flavourlessness]
   I've got a better idea; don't.
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   ;)
8. 2015-10-25 at 12:19 PM UTC

   #8
   The Self Taught Man Black Hole
   this hurt me
9. 2015-10-25 at 3:35 PM UTC

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   kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink
   whimpy wimpy whimpers ^
10. 2015-10-25 at 6:29 PM UTC

    #10
    

    Lanny Bird of Courage
    hey, hey, try doing some jordaan mason covers
11. 2015-10-25 at 6:59 PM UTC

    #11
    

    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink

    hey, hey, try doing some jordaan mason covers

    
    
    Just checked him out good stuff. Kinda like jeff mangum, daniel johnston, half japanese.. dat outsider art...
    
    
    
    He's a lil more on the folk side for my taste but It's cool. I am trying for a more japanther/ microphones emo feel. The kinda stuff I was all about when i was younger
    
    
    
    
    
12. 2015-10-25 at 7:24 PM UTC

    #12
    

    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink

    Eeww don't sing, i thought you were producing beats.

    
    
    That's funny coming from a guy who sits on his floor of his parents house with a mickey mouse tambourine..
    
    But anyways, I need to buy a new mic and I will start recording guitar tracks, I already have a few songs written for guitar
13. 2015-10-25 at 7:35 PM UTC

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    Sophie Pedophile Tech Support

    That's funny coming from a guy who sits on his floor of his parents house with a mickey mouse tambourine..

    
    You need to get your facts straight before you start talking shit.
    
14. 2015-10-25 at 7:38 PM UTC

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    kroz weak whyte, frothy cuck, and former twink

    You need to get your facts straight before you start talking shit.

    
    
    What are you talking about?