2024-06-23 at 3:22 PM UTC
I wonder how Eve first discovered sex...
"Hey! It fits perfectly!!"
2024-06-23 at 10:28 PM UTC
I'm only on page 10 and feel like she's shit at creating an atmosphere or she's a Karen. But it gives me hope that if I write a book it would be successful.
2024-06-23 at 11:14 PM UTC
I keep thinking of things I'd change. Like ik I'm early into the story but I wouldn't have made it at Halloween time and I'd rather he be an unhinged serial killer than a hacker trying to take down a cartel.
2024-06-23 at 11:14 PM UTC
If there's enough I want to change then it might inspire me to write my own version.
2024-06-23 at 11:18 PM UTC
I might write a short version, I think bcus of my unique thought processes I could write more convincingly from the perspective of an unhinged serial killer.
2024-06-24 at 3:29 AM UTC
Oh hey guys am I too late for the book review?? I think this is a great ide…….
….oh.
My god.
Kafka what have you done to your dick?
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2024-06-24 at 3:41 AM UTC
Knew a guy once who wanted transplant his dick onto his forehead.
2024-06-24 at 9:39 PM UTC
I'm on page 53 this is the most badly written book I've ever read. I want to write something inspired by the psychos in my life but I can't write from my real life even though it's like a movie.
2024-06-24 at 10:59 PM UTC
Even the first kill was written badly ugh
2024-06-24 at 11:03 PM UTC
He should have lured him into the woods with the excuse of needing someone to film a gangbang of an incapacitated girl instead of just stabbing him at the campfire over a blunt without even a rant beforehand.