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I wrote some more lyrics

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    I can't let go till someone let go
    I need em to cock it back body bag walk it back
    Suit and tie all in black
    They can have the Cadillac
    Just leave me with the hate
    So I can pick the date
    My thoughts I will not state
    No longer shall I wait
    Just no I will not stay
    I'm watching what I say
    Sunshine nope not a ray
    Just know I'm not okay
    Don't care about the cash
    I put away the stash
    Although the car won't crash I'll be gone in a flash
    So hate me it's a must
    so my decisions just
    This life shit is a bust
    And I am at the end like fucking pizza crust.
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    Lyrics are supposed to flow naturally and not just rhyme for the sake of rhyming.

    I wrote a song with music in time
    The words are crap but at least they rhyme
    It's about a dead body, pizza and a car
    I think this song is going to get me far
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    Originally posted by Jiggaboo_Johnson Lyrics are supposed to flow naturally and not just rhyme for the sake of rhyming.

    I wrote a song with music in time
    The words are crap but at least they rhyme
    It's about a dead body, pizza and a car
    I think this song is going to get me far


    It's about more than that the underlying message is about suicide
    Ie I will not stay Sunshine nope not a ray
    It's about the underlying message
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    ..and a car and pizza
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    Originally posted by Jiggaboo_Johnson ..and a car and pizza



    I'm saying I'm going to die soon even if it's not in a car crash
    I'm at the end of my life like when you get to a pizza and your at the crust
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    Is it a stuffed crust?
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    Originally posted by Jiggaboo_Johnson Is it a stuffed crust?

    I think you're missing the point
    The following users say it would be alright if the author of this post didn't die in a fire!
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    Lodger Free African Astronaut
    Are you Les, by chance?
  9. #9
    Originally posted by Lodger Free Are you Les, by chance?


    Who is les?
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